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Write a short paragraph?

Let’s apply what we have learned so far and write a paragraph to introduce something or someone employing those commonly used irregular verbs shown on page 22 of Azar’s text.

Please note: a paragraph is a group of related sentences about a single topic. It contains three parts: (1) the topic sentence (usually the first sentence in a paragraph), (2) supporting sentences and (3) the concluding sentence.
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乐呵木棉 (威望:0) (广东 广州) 计算机相关 其它 - 组织企业的CMMI5、ISO9001:2008认...

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Thanks for corrected.

“In my report to management I demonstrated outstanding results of our work. In short, our team has performed well in three out of the ten areas. These ten areas were designated for improvement. However, further improvement is needed in six other areas.”
I think what over the sentence existed difference with reality.
In fact, I want expressed my mind as follows:
Report the audit result mainly was described between evaluation processes found some of best practices and improvement opportunities in working.
Had found three the best practices;
Also, found ten improvement opportunities. Among the improvement opportunities have only six be confirmed have value, other four be misunderstand.

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