------英语改错.
----新招一位QE,学历只有中专,看着机灵就收下了.:lol: 下面是他写的一篇英文短文,请各位帮忙改错,顺便评价一下他的英文水平.(不知所云,勉强可读,四级上下,六级高手:P )
另外,下文中"A"指一家公司名.
全文如下:
About A's Advantages and Disadvantages
Advantages:
Disadvantages:
另外,下文中"A"指一家公司名.
全文如下:
About A's Advantages and Disadvantages
Advantages:
- A owns the world class customers. These customer's requirements (i.e. quality, service, production, delivery) continually facilitate A taking new technique, devices and methods to provide the best connectors and services to achieve customer satisfactions.
- A has 27 connector production lines which have amount of convenient inspection equipments (e.g. CCD tester, mistake-proofing fixture etc.). These equipments can ensure the quality of products meet the customer's specifications and reduce the labor cost.
- A has excellent training system. The operators, engineers, management must be qualified prior to normal working at their location. All members must be trained according to " yearly training plan' to evaluate their knowledge, skills etc.
- A has excellent Quality Management System. There are many procedures and introductions to assist operators to monitor the products and processes. QA Department has A large laboratory, it can do some reliability test, environment test, electrical testing and mechanical testing refer to international standards and industry standards. A had been certificated by BSI and SGS with ISO 9001, ISO14001, TS16949.
Disadvantages:
- A is an OEM company, it has no own brand.
- Some of major materials (e.g. contact, housing, electronic component etc) come from abroad, A can't produce itself. Therefore, the delivery time and the quality of materials sometimes affect A's normal production.
- At phase of new products design, some of analysis tools (e.g. Cpk, FMEA, DOE, QFD) can't be applied by engineers.
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