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----新招一位QE,学历只有中专,看着机灵就收下了.:lol: 下面是他写的一篇英文短文,请各位帮忙改错,顺便评价一下他的英文水平.(不知所云,勉强可读,四级上下,六级高手:P )
另外,下文中"A"指一家公司名.
全文如下:
About A's Advantages and Disadvantages
Advantages:
  1. A owns the world class customers. These customer's requirements (i.e. quality, service, production, delivery) continually facilitate A taking new technique, devices and methods to provide the best connectors and services to achieve customer satisfactions.
  2. A has 27 connector production lines which have amount of convenient inspection equipments (e.g. CCD tester, mistake-proofing fixture etc.). These equipments can ensure the quality of products meet the customer's specifications and reduce the labor cost.
  3. A has excellent training system. The operators, engineers, management must be qualified prior to normal working at their location. All members must be trained according to " yearly training plan' to evaluate their knowledge, skills etc.
  4. A has excellent Quality Management System. There are many procedures and introductions to assist operators to monitor the products and processes. QA Department has A large laboratory, it can do some reliability test, environment test, electrical testing and mechanical testing refer to international standards and industry standards. A had been certificated by BSI and SGS with ISO 9001, ISO14001, TS16949.


Disadvantages:
  1. A is an OEM company, it has no own brand.

  1. Some of major materials (e.g. contact, housing, electronic component etc) come from abroad, A can't produce itself. Therefore, the delivery time and the quality of materials sometimes affect A's normal production.

  1. At phase of new products design, some of analysis tools (e.g. Cpk, FMEA, DOE, QFD) can't be applied by engineers.

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About A's Strengths and Weaknesses

Strengths:

  1. “A” has customers around the world, and many of them are Fortune 500 companies. These customers’ stringent requirements in quality, service, production, delivery, etc. have helped the company develop new technologies, methods and equipments to deliver the best connectors and services to its cumstomers.

  1. “A” has 27 connector production lines, and all are well-equipped with modern inspection and testing devices such as CCD tester, mistake-proofing fixture, etc. to ensure product quality at the lowest possible cost.

  1. “A” has installed an excellent training program. It is mandatory that all employees, managers included, must go through required trainings prior to their assignments. And, they all have to follow their personal "yearly training/evaluation plan” during performance evaluation.

  1. “A” has implemented an excellent Quality Management System. Many processes and procedures have been developed to assist operators to monitor and control. On the other hand, QA Department has established a large and well-equipped laboratory to conduct tests for the products to meet international and industrial standards. “A” has been certificated by BSI and SGS for being in compliance with ISO 9001, ISO14001 and TS16949.


Weaknesses:

  1. “A” is an OEM company and does not own its name brand.

  1. Some of its major suppliers are located overseas. Therefore, delivery time and quality issues sometimes affect A's normal production.

  1. A’s engineers are not familiar with the use of analysis tools like Cpk, FMEA, DOE, and QFD.

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