英语高手,请帮帮我！！
以下是一小段英语，感觉有些地方不妥，但又不确定，恳请哪英语高手帮帮我，先谢谢各位了！！！
I once let the trustest love sliped away from below my eyes.Only to know that regreting myself when it was too late.It is no paint in the would can come near to this.If only God would give me another chance .I will said to the girl.I love you .If it had to be a limit of time .I pray it's ten thousands years.
I once let the trustest love sliped away from below my eyes.Only to know that regreting myself when it was too late.It is no paint in the would can come near to this.If only God would give me another chance .I will said to the girl.I love you .If it had to be a limit of time .I pray it's ten thousands years.
没有找到相关结果
已邀请:
RSS Feed
6 个回复
kitekathleen (威望:0)
赞同来自:
I once let the trustest love sliped（改为slip） away from（删除from） below my eyes.Only to know that regreting myself（改为Only to regret） when it was too late.It（改为There） is no paint in the would（错别字world）（加that） can come near to this.If only God would give me another chance .I will said to （改为tell） the （that）girl.I love you .If it had （there have）to be a limit of time .I pray it's ten thousands （改为thousand）years.
解释
- let sb. do sth. let后面跟的动词应该用原形
- say后面的话直接是跟说的内容，tell sb sth才可以都跟
- 数字（如one，two，three等）thousand（没有s） ；或者thousands（复数）of
- “有”的表示方法一般是there be句型
其他的话分析一下主谓宾好了，就找的出问题了；还有就是读着比较顺口另，if only后面虚拟语气知道的人可不多啊，赞一个！