Dear Sir or Madam,
Your advertisement for a Network Maintenance Engineer in the April 10, 51job daily interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking .
According to the advertisement, your position requires top university, bachelor or above in computer science or equivalent field and proficient in Windows Vista and LINUX system. I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from Graduate school of ShenYang university of computer engineering this year with a M.S. degree. My studies have included courses in computer control and management and I designed a control simulation system developed with Microsoft Visual InterDev and SQL server.
Throughout my education, I have gasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. Not only have I passed CET-6, but more important I can communicated with the native speaker freely in English. My ability to write and speak English are good enough for work.
If you think I can be of any help to your company, please contact me at your convenience.
With many thanks and many best wishes
洛客 (威望:12) (海外 海外) 咨询业 总监
This letter is not bad, but we must remember the purpose of sending out a resume is to win an interview. Since the employer may receive hundreds if not thousands resumes for the opening, being able to attract an employer's attention to read your letter is the key to success. Hence, make your resume short and exciting. The following is what I would do as a minimum.
This is in response to your advertised position of a Network Maintenance Engineer in 51Job Daily, April 10, 2012. I meet all your stated requirements.
I will receive my MS degree from the prestigious Graduate School of ShenYang Uuniversity of Computer Engineering (SYUCE) this fall. While at SYUCE, out of many accomplishments, I have designed a control simulation system using Microsoft Visual InterDev and SQL server that has won high praises from my fellow student colleagues and faculty members.
Regarding my English skills, I have passed the rigorous CET-6 test. I have no problem to communicate verbally with native English speaking people, and I believe my writing skills are much better than those of an average CET-6.
For details of my background, I am attaching my resume.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Very sincerely yours,