Exercise 5-10-2013: Write a paragraph on the given subject.
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From Dr. Ann Hogue Text “First Steps in Academic Writing”, p. 62
Step 1: Combine the sentences in each of the ten groups to make one sentence. Some of your sentences will be simple, and some will be compound. There may be more than one possible correct way to combine each group.
Step 2: Write the sentences as a paragraph. Add listing-order transition signals (First, … Second, … Third …) to each main point and a conclusion signal to the concluding sentence. (Hint: There are three main points.)
The “Weaker” Sex
From Dr. Ann Hogue Text “First Steps in Academic Writing”, p. 62
Step 1: Combine the sentences in each of the ten groups to make one sentence. Some of your sentences will be simple, and some will be compound. There may be more than one possible correct way to combine each group.
Step 2: Write the sentences as a paragraph. Add listing-order transition signals (First, … Second, … Third …) to each main point and a conclusion signal to the concluding sentence. (Hint: There are three main points.)
The “Weaker” Sex
- []It is often said that women are the weaker sex, but women are actually superior to men in several ways. (Don’t change this sentence.) [/][] A. Women live longer than men. B. Women stay healthier than men. C. They do this in all countries of the world. [/][] A. This difference starts at birth. B. This difference continues until old age. [/][] A. On the average, women live seven years longer than men. B. They do this in the United States.[/][] A. There are 105 boys to every 100 girls at birth. B. There are twice as many women as men at age 80. (Use but.) [/][] A. Women are better than men at things. B. These things involve the five senses. (Change these things to that.) [/][] A. Women have a sharper sense of taste. B. Women have a sharper sense of smell. [/][] A. Men are physically stronger than women. B. Women are mentally stronger. [/][] A. For example, more men than women had emotional problems. B. This happened during bombing attacks on London. C. This happened in World War II. [/][] Do you still believe that women are “the weaker sex” (Don’t change this sentence.) [/]
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First, in our life circle, women live longer than men, and women stay healthier than men, so they do more in all coutries of the world.
Sencond,Wemen and men are difference start at birth, and difference contiene until old age.You know,on the average, women live seven years longer longer than men, the Unitesd States have relabiltiy dates show to us.
Third, the boys birth rate is more than five pencent of girls, but 200% live women as men at age 80.
Fourth,women are better than men at things, that involve the five senses.
Next, women have s sharper sense of taste and smell.
Finally,Men are physically stronger than women,however women are mentally stonger than men.For example,more men than women had emotional problems as happened during bombing had been attacking on London in World War II
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aha, thanks for Locke show a nice knowlege to us.:lol: